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Your big sister comes over for a visit, but something smells fishy to you. (My first try at first person, if good I might create a text adventure game)
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Posted by Gelenor 9 years ago Report
Well I liked it. Cruel preds are my favorite.
Posted by iwillnomu 9 years ago Report
You should definitely try for a text adventure game, this is good stuff!
Posted by The K 9 years ago Report
I enjoyed the indigestion and burping parts of this story.
Posted by InsanebowDash 9 years ago Report
Very very good!
Posted by ScaledWall 9 years ago Report
Nice story. I enjoyed reading.
Posted by Booper55 5 years ago Report
Isnt this second person instead of first?