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Lisalla the temptress of fate is discovering what happens to girls who find themselves inside a toilet bowl at the Last Honeyburst Lodge, a mansion of fantastic properties that caters to girls on their end of year senior trip. Everything comes to a head when Matron meets Matron and many mysteries are at last laid bare over a symphony of hungry lady-gulping toilets!
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Posted by Critchett 9 years ago Report
Sorry for the long-long wait, but I believe in trying to put forth what I feel is ready and done hopefully right! It's a lot to read, but I worked hard to try to keep it all very interesting. I love comments, both thumbs ups and thumbs downs, so I'd love to hear what anyone thinks!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report
Wow! Loved the unexpected fate of the hostess (not saying any more spoiler!) Just when I thought this was pretty much going to go predictably, that just smashed in the surreality further! In fact, I feel like she meant to do that.
Loved all of it! A wonderful read and a wonderful adventure in characters losing themselves along with their inhibitions.
Posted by Critchett 9 years ago Report
Thanks, Shades! I worked hard to weave a lot of plot together into a delicious tapestry while still trying to keep readers on their toes! It was a TON of fun to write for sure!