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The continued adventures of Tenryuus insatiable appetite and poor choices.
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Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 9 years ago Report
Where'd you get the source immage?
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51928884
Here! I'll update the description as well.
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 9 years ago Report
Ah. Sweet. Thanks, alot of people won't do that.
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
You got it
Posted by noisekeeper 9 years ago Report
Oh quite the interesting turn things have gone. But I am sure Tenryuu's gut can handle it haha.
'Good stuff' as the guy in the hat would say.
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Oh of course it can, it wouldn't be nearly as much fun if it couldn't!
Unless you are into that sort of thing I guess.
Posted by algog8 9 years ago Report
Is tenryu going to take on the rest of the ships too?
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Depends! Destroyer squad 6 is certainly in a lot of trouble, thats for sure.
Posted by algog8 9 years ago Report
Admiral ragequits, feeds entire navy to tenryuu--
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
The whole thing? That's a lot of ships!
Though I wont lie, when I play I always got a bit of a thrill modernizing ships into each other. My starting destroyer Murakumo is pretty much just a bottomless pit for all my duplicate ships.
Posted by algog8 9 years ago Report
More and more copies--- If not the admiral, that Tasuta would probably be the one to make her do it
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
2lewd
Posted by Reaper 9 years ago Report
I'm getting the feeling Hibiki didn't think this plan through very well.
After all, there's still going to be one witness left after Tenryuu takes care of Akatsuki and Ikazuchi...
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
She'll be fineeeee. Probably. Or a layer of cruiser pudge. I don't even know yet. What do you think?
Posted by Reaper 9 years ago Report
I think you should write whichever conclusion you like best. Judging by what I've seen so far, this will be a lovely series either way.
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Thanks for the vote confidence! I suppose we'll have to burn that bridge when we get to it!
Posted by Junogray 9 years ago Report
Just what I'd expect, I'm loving this tale thus far, wonder what will happen to hibiki at the end of all this. Either way I'm sure it will be wonderful all a'round' Xp
Posted by Junogray 9 years ago Report
I know it's probably not a big thing, but I was wondering, at the end Hibiki says "W-well that's two down" was that supposed to say two or one? I've been feeling like I missed something somewhere
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Nothing missed! Just a typo. There are a few be caught, I need to edit and re upload this because they bug me. It wa getting towards 4am towards the end there and I was just trying to slam this out and finish it at that point.
Posted by Junogray 9 years ago Report
Know the feeling, written a few things really late and ended with things I can't understand why I did a few days later when reading them
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Jesus Christ I should stop replying on my phone, I just noticed how many typos were in my reply about typos. I can read/write I promise.
Posted by exploration 9 years ago Report
Really looking forward to the next part
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I always like hearing that people enjoy my work!
Posted by exploration 9 years ago Report
ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) part 3 when
the hype speaks volumes about how much I liked parts 1 & 2 believe me.
Posted by Cpt 9 years ago Report
Wow! Thanks for checking back! Its mostly done, but I'm not satisfied with it. Im tinkering with it still. Have no fear it will exist though. Your hype fuels me.
Posted by exploration 8 years ago Report
psst.
are you gonna get annoyed if I ask about part 3 again?
Posted by exploration 8 years ago Report
I do hate to nag but i'm curious as to what happened.
Posted by TenryuuGodess 8 years ago Report
Awesome story Cpt, really looking forward part 3
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
Wow, I can't believe I've never read this somehow. Really glad I decided to check your page after the watch, both parts of this were fantastic