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Airplane Food (Alternative Version) By xxsameoldxx -- Report

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Couldn't decide which one to do so I wrote both.

On a long haul fight one guy gets hungry and another gets curious.

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deletn92b69g26

Posted by deletn92b69g26 9 years ago Report

Also , great alternative story! :3

Wywy

Posted by Wywy 9 years ago Report

I agree!

GalionFiremage

Posted by GalionFiremage 9 years ago Report

Excellent story, I enjoyed the alternate version.

timdavis

Posted by timdavis 9 years ago Report

I love it, but in the paragraph when he wakes up in the airport, you start calling Hugh by Grant's name. Just a few typos.

xxsameoldxx

Posted by xxsameoldxx 9 years ago Report

Thanks ahh damn I should have gave it one last proof read.

ZaaZaa

Posted by ZaaZaa 9 years ago Report

Ah, man, accidental digestion always does it for me. Great job.

xxsameoldxx

Posted by xxsameoldxx 9 years ago Report

Glad you liked it thanks a lot :)

lyingunderfire

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

Great two stories. However, I think there may have been a mistake with the names in the third from last paragraph.

lyingunderfire

Posted by lyingunderfire 9 years ago Report

Never mind. You already know as another already commented on it.