Amazing. This has to be my favorite story you have done so far. I love it. How you describe how big Jacklyn's belly is. How you describe her gas and burping and even how the burp smelled. How you described all the food going down her throat. And how she is always hungry. I love this story, I was rooting for Jacklyn to get a full belly the whole time.
Posted by The K 9 years ago Report
Amazing. This has to be my favorite story you have done so far. I love it. How you describe how big Jacklyn's belly is. How you describe her gas and burping and even how the burp smelled. How you described all the food going down her throat. And how she is always hungry. I love this story, I was rooting for Jacklyn to get a full belly the whole time.