Posted by joeburp22181 9 years ago Report

I liked it, nicely done!

Posted by SilverHornedDeer 9 years ago Report

I'm enjoying this series so freaking much, damn this is so good!! I especially like how it goes straight to the point without wasting time on anything else other than the sex/vore itself, and I also really like the unnamed protagonists.
Honestly I'd *love* to see some Breast vore as well, with milk/tit fat tf following right after it, but please keep going regardless.

Posted by Mastercin 9 years ago Report

Like i said on the earlier ones i do plan on doing nearly every type of 'human' vore available. So happy to hear that you're enjoying it :) I dont know how long it will be before the next one rolls out but stay tuned, inspiration can hit at any time haha

Posted by Vae 9 years ago Report

I can't tell how I feel about this. As for now I can say with certainty that these 3 simple stories have been some of my favorite work on this site I've seen in a terribly long time ( especially the first), and thank you so much for making them. However, I'm afraid our pred here is on the edge of becoming another bland consumption machine. Her intimacy with the prey here is redeeming, and it's your story so I have no place in telling you what to do. But i think it would be such a shame to see her become another inhuman unrelatable pred who cares of little but satisfaction of hunger and pleasure.

The first story drew me in so much because of these gentler traits. She did what she wanted, but the prey was definitly more than just food before and after the vore.

Sorry for the rant. I'm going to keep an eager eye on this series, and regardless of my preferences, I'm sure you won't dissapoint.

Posted by Mastercin 9 years ago Report

I totally understand what you're talking about and i agree! The only point against it I can think of is that I have designed these stories to get to the peak of the moment as fast as possible.

For example, I don't give them names for the soul reason of putting oneself within the point of view of either character. As much as I promote the thought of love between a couple, showing them bond outside of the bedroom would diminish the barrier between reality and sexual Fantasy.

However, this is not to say that there will be gentle moments between the two of them, its just difficult to continue a short, fetish based narrative without employing, well, the fetish!

On the subject of her consumption machine-ness, think of it this way (if only to appease you own mind and add some context. Consider this 'canon' haha!) It is the first few weeks that she has ever learned she had this power. She found a man that loves her despite it and is excited to share with her all the joys and carnal pleasures of it. As they're life together goes on it will subside and the girl that you were drawn to in the beginning will resurface. She is just an excited young adult right now, messing around with her lover. She will never lose sight of her own humanity so long as i can help it!

Frack! and you said You ranted xD. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it. As per your concern, and my own desire, the next one will be a bit more tender, though in the end its still predator and prey ;)

Posted by Vae 9 years ago Report

wow, thats got to be the most satisfying and committed response I've ever gotten to one of my oddball complaints. You sir, are a hero. I will happily accept that as a personal canon, and you have my respects.

Posted by Mastercin 9 years ago Report

:D