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This story is great for people who fantasize about being under a toilet when a girl is doing her business. Then devouring her whole after she has finished her business on the toilet.
Warning Heavy Scat but it is Sirvoresalot type of scat so imagine it like digested girl jelly. You will be fine.
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Posted by theheadsn 9 years ago Report
interesting idea for sure. Male preds arent really my thing, but I thought the story was pretty cool
Posted by sirvoresalot 9 years ago Report
Sorry about that I like to mix it up. I will make a female version with this same concept.
Posted by theheadsn 9 years ago Report
Nothing to be sorry about! :) write whatever inspires you. Any content is good content. I'm just happy to be able to read new stories all the time
Posted by SightlessStudios 9 years ago Report
The concept is decent, but the story itself is siplistic and poorly written. I hope very much that future stories are better. my biggest criticism is that the story's perspective changes back and forth between first and third person, and that the sentences all seem very short. This feels very much like a rough draft.
Posted by TheHumanPred 3 years ago Report
I actually really love this concept idea. Would love to see a sequel one day actually. Maybe even a female predator. One thing through that would make the story better if the Prey had their own dialogue.