I saw this on the forums a few days back but didn't comment since I prefer not to post there-- sorry about that! I'm glad to be able to tell you now just how happy I was to come across this story, and how much I enjoyed it. I'm admittedly a blatant sucker for any material that has to do with Peridot eating people, and you in particular did an expert job of capturing her snide, irritable demeanor-- which is something I personally place a little too much value on, if I'm being honest. >>; But despite that, your being able to write an existing character that accurately is an impressive skill in and of itself, so it deserves praise regardless.
The story was a pleasant length to read and your manner of describing things is very appealing. It hit a lot of my favorite aspects and with how accurate you got Peridot, it was extremely easy for me to imagine it all. Aquamarine was similarly well-written and believable; she fit right into the universe, in my opinion! This is awesome and you should feel awesome for writing it. \o/
Posted by Cerulesta 9 years ago Report
I saw this on the forums a few days back but didn't comment since I prefer not to post there-- sorry about that! I'm glad to be able to tell you now just how happy I was to come across this story, and how much I enjoyed it. I'm admittedly a blatant sucker for any material that has to do with Peridot eating people, and you in particular did an expert job of capturing her snide, irritable demeanor-- which is something I personally place a little too much value on, if I'm being honest. >>; But despite that, your being able to write an existing character that accurately is an impressive skill in and of itself, so it deserves praise regardless.
The story was a pleasant length to read and your manner of describing things is very appealing. It hit a lot of my favorite aspects and with how accurate you got Peridot, it was extremely easy for me to imagine it all. Aquamarine was similarly well-written and believable; she fit right into the universe, in my opinion! This is awesome and you should feel awesome for writing it. \o/
Posted by Portent 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I certainly do feel awesome, after that compliment. \o/
Posted by hydranoid2009 9 years ago Report
I have to say, you did a wonderful job! Great detail, great characterization, and it was overall an enjoyable read ^^ I hope you make more!