Posted by rugli 9 years ago Report

Not sure I did call this willing if he starts crying about being eaten. I don´t know if hot lady would want to eat me I wouldn't brake down in tears over it.

Posted by QuickFood911 9 years ago Report

Well, to my mind, he agreed without any coercion. I imagined it as kind of the psychological situation when a heroic character sacrifices their life for some greater good. They are willing, but still death is scary. Thanks for the comment!

Posted by ruinedhaze1920 9 years ago Report

This piece of work in my opinion brings up a question that most people in the vore community ask about lethal vore, what's the price of life? This piece while only slightly touching on that with the example of the portrait vs the money choice on Greg is curious but nothing I find personally worth offing yourself over a portrait. All in all, a good piece that sparks a big question, what would you die for?

Also by the way, the human body on black market sells for 45,000,000 dollars us currency on the black market if you are a healthy specimen of a human being. Why anyone would kill themselves and waste that much money is beyond me. I seriously find that people often overlook this fact and the fact that people's selfishness truly makes some stories were the victim surrenders willingly a little hard to swallow.

This was a good story, just some ideas and perspective for you, quickfood911.

Posted by QuickFood911 9 years ago Report

45 million dollars? I am not sure whether to be impressed or horrified by that.

Regarding the portrait, I kinda imagined it something like Mona Lisa. Greg being an art student was important, as he could recognize the brilliance of the work, and at least to his mind his life was worth it.

Thanks for the comment! These kinds of insightful comments make the writing process truly worth it.

Posted by ruinedhaze1920 9 years ago Report

Hey, good to know people still keep an open mind about things these days, yeah in regard to the whole " your body is worth 45 million dollars in total." keep in mind that means helathy organs, zero fat percentage on your body, all your blood and organs, a considerable amount of hair on your body and lastly completly well maintained blood flow/ diet for celluar health. That's why the body is worth so much.

I understand the importance of art, but more recently in my mind I find it "useless" as I am more of a scientist mind set. Still art is important in human culture and that I can respect.

To be honest I am working on some experimental writing pieces of my own so good to learn from smaller but good writers like you and other good writers such as beardykomodo/ komodo.

As long as you always think about what you are giving the audience and you are happy with your work, then keep at it.

Posted by straightup2006 9 years ago Report

Dang, nice man.