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Lifting the Curse: Dragon Blood By Ento -- Report

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The first part of a series of stories involving the fates crew.
Rather than an edited chatlog, I actually wrote this in it's entirety!
I know it's not the greatest, but this was my first real attempt at this.

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Cruich

Posted by Cruich 9 years ago Report

You might want to remove "Other Analogy for how red she was blushing".

TeaKey

Posted by TeaKey 9 years ago Report

Looking forward to more.

Rathe

Posted by Rathe 9 years ago Report

"Nyx was frustrated beyond belief, which Elise took notice of in their next battle. Nyx Had Barely be able to hit anything the whole time."

But that's entirely normal...

That aside, I really enjoyed this! I especially loved how Nyx coerced both princesses into meeting with her.

Ento

Posted by Ento 9 years ago Report

Oh come on, Nyx isn't THAT bad a shot.
She can normally hit about 50% of the time.
And if you had to think about how to murder and eat a royal, you'd be a bad shot too

ToweringValkyrie

Posted by ToweringValkyrie 9 years ago Report

Not typically into cooking when it comes to vore, but I'd be lying if I said I didn't enjoy this.

I wonder what will happen between Nyx and Hana once she realizes her liege is missing~

Ento

Posted by Ento 9 years ago Report

Well, needless to say you can't just go slashing up anyone you dont like in the camp. After all, this is revelations Corrin's Camp, Not Conquest's. (Seriously, FUCK Revelations corrin, she had good char for ONE CHAPTER)

Anyways, Nyx is likely not going to go around, eating everyone at camp, but the spell did only say "Start", so she's not done yet.

Though neither of these women are our next protagonist, though.

ToweringValkyrie

Posted by ToweringValkyrie 9 years ago Report

Yeah, I definitely wouldn't say Corrin is one of my favorite protagonists in the series. Not by a long shot

Regardless, I will definitely be looking forward to the next part of this :)