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Another silly short, this time about why you really shouldn't try to rush science.

Also made it F/F because ladies are tasty too. :D

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TW

Posted by TW 9 years ago Report

That was actually a lot of fun and an interesting usage of teleportation. Although how it teleporeted to her stomach directly and not just her abdominal cavity would be an interesting note. However that's just me. Overall very enjoyable, although I prefer more weight gain. :) Good job.

MPennanti

Posted by MPennanti 9 years ago Report

Yeah... there was some creative license taken with where she ended up. And feel free to have her gain a bunch of weight in your headcanon, I don't mind. :D

mojo-2131285

Posted by mojo-2131285 9 years ago Report

Just discovered your writing. Very nice.

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 9 years ago Report

Good story, love the detail and the hedonistic view of the predator and the bitchiness of the unwilling prey. Fun combination. Keep up the good writ.

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 9 years ago Report

Wonderful story. It felt just the right amount of wordiness and scientific flair that kept it flowing well. Excellent disposal and digestion scenes.

Bright

Posted by Bright 8 years ago Report

This was a really enjoyable story.
A bit of karmic destiny is always fun.

MysteriousPlan

Posted by MysteriousPlan 7 years ago Report

I have to wonder what it would have been like if the Professor had teleported her instead, maybe out of curve & height envy or for being pulled out of the machine before pressing the red button at the last moment? I can imagine an Alternate ending, with Amy being told by Wendy to set up the imaging equipment, noting to also install cameras inside the teleporter as well, being inorganic and unable to affect their results. Amy, being more than intelligent enough to recognize obvious danger, protests before giving in after the future of her career is threatened and begins setup, only to look up catching a glimpse as the apple from before sails toward the button while Wendy stands right on the "X" mark grinning madly... That would certainly be one massive belly... Maybe it ends a few months later while she's talking to her brand new assistant, while sporting some bountiful curves, and mentions the "inactive" artifact needs cleaning as she chews on the end of her pen drooling...

htaed

Posted by htaed 6 years ago Report

>Wendy fell from the pages of history forever.

You can say she went down in the anals of history.