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Here you can see the first vore related picture with my OC Pred Anni in a fantasy outfit! :D
Please tell me what you think.
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Posted by dele350b26b9 9 years ago Report
Very cute! Looks like she undressed him too before gulping him down ^^
Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report
Of course she did :P They taste better this way :3
Posted by momonari 9 years ago Report
This is a VERY GOOD work !!! Congratulations !!!
You're improving even more.
Ok, let me give just you 2 tips for this one:
1) Learn to manage your space: You're still wasting and misusing too much space. 80% of your picture is white nothing, do a close-up of the pred instead, maybe a bigger stomach caption panel.
2) Seems like you got lazy on the boots. They look too simple in contrast with the rest of the picture and lack basic details; I'm not telling you to fill them with heavy details like the arms, but you need at least some light detailing on the boots too.
Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report
Hehe thank you (:
I thought about details I could add to the boots but I just had no further ideas ^^"
Posted by momonari 9 years ago Report
I didn't mean details, like jewels and stuff, I meant details like light or shadow effects, or at least more definition on her right foot ...
The left foot is not so bad, it looks like a foot; but her right foot looks like a triangle and square put together... Too simple, it looks lacking and out of place in comparison to the rest of the picture. It's the kind of error that hurts the whole picture which is otherwise amazing.
Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report
Soooo what do you think of this! :P
Posted by momonari 9 years ago Report
MUCH BETTER !!! Almost perfect ! ^_^
Posted by tigercloud 9 years ago Report
Like the outfit and the inside view x3
Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report
thanks! Much effort went into the design of the outfit^^ :P