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An obnoxious tourist experiences more of the local culture than he expected.
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This one turned out short and sweet. Based on an idea suggested by petitepred.
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Posted by TongueCuddlingLouse 8 years ago Report
Really love this idea and some really awesome post vore scenes! :D
Posted by 00000 8 years ago Report
Really love that you included some post-vore sexy time in this one! We don't see enough of that. Good writing! Any more in mind on a similar theme?
Posted by MPennanti 8 years ago Report
Thanks. In general I seem to tend towards prey that "deserve it", though maybe it would be fun to go the other direction and have an extremely amoral predator. XD
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
Short and sweet indeed. In particular, I really liked this sentence:
"He screamed as he was pushed head-first into her esophagus, the painfully tight tube of muscle almost crushing the breath out of him as it propelled him down into the hot depths of her slender body."
It's very descriptive, it's well constructed and flows naturally and sexy as well.