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Our hero Ulrika has entered the Brawler's Guild in Deeprun Tram! Who shall be the first to fall to her might?
Please suggest any improvements you think I can make to my writing! I appreciate any advice to make my stories better.
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Posted by GameOfPickles 8 years ago Report
Nice story! The writing is well done with some good descriptions of everything. Also "Millie Watts" is a great name!
Posted by Freevase 8 years ago Report
Thank you very much!