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Okay. I admit it. I fell prey (pun not withstanding) to wanting to continue this story and give it a more vore-ish ending.
The first part was open ended for a reason, so think of this as an optional ending. (even though it's kinda more on the official side since it has 'part two' in the name...)
What the hell am I rambling about? Never mind. Let's just pretend that the above paragraph isn't here. (It's okay 'above paragraph', we still like you)
Easy Access;
Part 1; https://aryion.com/g4/view/343853
Part 3; https://aryion.com/g4/view/428711
As always, Thank you for reading, and tell me what you think.
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Posted by Ledatic 8 years ago Report
Potentially being churned out over a prolonged series of steamy dragon makings is... well, fucking hot. Nothing like riding out huge orgasms from the inside before you eventually join a milky climax, right? Plus, the way you describe it through Bashir's dialogue simply... obliterated my buttons, one could say!
Overall, excellent writing. Great grammar, balance between details and progression and general plot (as well as a smut story plot can get, anyways). Thank you for sharing yet another treasured CV piece! As a last remark though, I wouldn't have minded a general description of what the two socks humans experienced in a timeless interva - but that is just nitpicking!
Posted by Ledatic 8 years ago Report
Jeeze, autocorrect is cancer in a code form sometimes. I meant "sac'd humans", not socks humans. :p
Posted by Jay1743 8 years ago Report
I have to agree with Ledatic that this pushes the right buttons. And I'd love to see a sequel.
Posted by Underside 7 years ago Report
Where do we find part one?
Posted by ShadowLurker 7 years ago Report
The first part was Story-over-vore, and as such, I put it in the Non-vore folder in my gallery. However, I've recently updated the descriptions of each part to have links to the others.
Posted by Underside 7 years ago Report
Ahh, okay. Didn't see it before. Now I see it and the new helpful links. Thanks.