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A few days have passed since Skryn has become unintentionally stuck aboard the Roughneck, and her plan to get off the ship is slowly coming to fruition. But the crew of the expedition cruiser has other plans...
Part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/368213
Part 3: https://aryion.com/g4/view/370028
As always, thank you for reading, and tell me what you think.
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Posted by Darian 7 years ago Report
Wooooooow. I gotta admit, i find this alien really interesting. Not all that big on the casual body enhancements with the humans, and I kinda wish the vore scene was a bit more... detailed, but still, this shows big promise.
Posted by ShadowLurker 7 years ago Report
I agree, I could have done the vore scene better. But as I said in the description of part 1, I got a little caught up in telling the story. Which, considering where I uploaded this, is probably a mistake on my part.
Now, I'm not quite sure how you find the body enhancements to be 'casual'. I understand I make mention of them several times, but to be called 'casual'?..... (Author's bias. I can't see it unless you explain it to me.)
I am glad that you find this alien interesting, and that you think this short series has promise, so, thank you.