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Hoi and whatnot.
Fourth time's the charm, right? RIGHT? =_=
No seriously, I've had to re-write this story FOUR times over the course of the past
few months... it is one of several trades, commissions and promises that I seflishly
put on the shelf during my worst depression yet, but like many of those items, I did
keep trying to finish them. Forcing myself to write even when feeling shit, Resulting
in that THEY all came out shit and I could never be happy with them.
And you know what? I am STILL not happy with this story. It did NOT turn out how
I pictured it, but I still can't do any better... so...
9kirby99 , sorry, but this is the best I can offer. Not for a lack of trying...
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Posted by ArgobargSoup 7 years ago Report
So I'm not much fer digestion myself, but I wanna say this story is really good. And, well, the way ya characterized Temmie and the Tems? Absolutely love it. :D
Posted by 9kirby99 7 years ago Report
Komodo. I really want to thank you so much for this. I'm glad you spent so much time on this, even being so thoughtful as to re-do it 'till you felt it was ready. I know about how you've been struggling recently, and...I'm so glad to hear you kept working on it throughout. I love this story, it's cute, nice, and fun to read. I love your portrayal of Miles, Temmie, the detail, everything.
Thank you, Komodo. This means so much, and I'll cherish this one in particular, not just for the quality, but for your hard work on it. ^^
Posted by wisecrack3 5 years ago Report
I love the part that hints at "Tem Armor" being a bullet proof vest, gg