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This was a commission for a Friend, originally completed 17 October 2016 / Edited and re-uploaded August 2020
As the typical new girl in school, Kim finds herself totally ignorant of the social order. Unfortunately for her, however, this leads to dire consequences when she stands up to the local rich girl, Patricia Brighton. Determined to put her in her place, Patricia shrinks Kim down and decides to have some fun with her during lunch.
I especially enjoyed writing the parts where the predator goes to gym class with a full belly, leading to a very messy and unhappy situation for Kim~
Enjoy and let me know your thoughts! For commission requests, please PM me ^^
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Posted by Twisty22 8 years ago Report
Pacifica is too good. Micro isn't exactly my thing but anything with her in it is made the better for it.
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Heheh thanks Reav ^^ Much appreciated!
Posted by Jimjohn101 8 years ago Report
Wow, this was fantastic! I really, really loved this story! Very well written especially the disposal scene. Great job!
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it~ ^^
Posted by Jimjohn101 8 years ago Report
No problem ^^ Keep up the amazing work!
Posted by PocketHero 8 years ago Report
Nice, I enjoyed this~
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it~
Posted by Cobbly 8 years ago Report
Wait... is it sentient disposal?
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
I don't think this one was, but I have other stories that feature that!
Posted by Lupe 8 years ago Report
Very well written!
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Thank you~!
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much for your generous review ^^ I appreciate it and I'll of course keep your thoughts in mind as I continue to write. I hope the suspension of disbelief wasn't too off-putting! Either way, I definitely appreciate your thoughts and look forward to hearing more on other pieces anytime~
Posted by ArgyleSweater 7 years ago Report
:o Pacifica! Great story!
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks much ^^ Glad you liked it!