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A slightly... different version of the S rank support conversation between Nah and Robin from Fire Emblem Awakening, given Nah's love of food and extreme appetite. With a female Robin because why not?
Contains Soft oral vore, soft digestion, fairly graphic disposal, gas, perversion, a revive item not normally in Awakening even if it's from the same series, and various other things. Oh, and some light romance and stuff, given the whole 'marriage support conversation' thing. Written in an RP with the owner of the Candlelight alts on Eka's chat room ( https://aryion.com/g4/user/xIso ), and uploaded at their suggestion. I was writing Robin, Nah was done by Candle.
I may start uploading some of my other completed RPs here sometime, and who knows? Maybe I'll do some short stories or something too.
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Posted by Cryos 8 years ago Report
Very nice~ I'd love to see more from you, this was fantastic!
Posted by DissociatedChaos 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I'll check with some of my other RP partners as to who wants to let me post our logs.
Posted by Lum_the_mad 7 years ago Report
Let me preface this by saying, I do not like scat, gas, or disposal. With that said this story/rp session was... amazing. Both of you managed to stay fairly IC with the characters which is always preferable for my favorite franchise. Not only was this in character, it actually started to make me ship Nah/Robin which is something that nobody has actually made me able to do. I was so moved by this story I almost wanted to commission a piece to commemorate it, it was that good. The writing was fantastic, and even though Robin went in partially clothed, I still found it to be one of the most erotic vore stories I've ever read. Well written vore stories with consensual death is very rare (free anyways), and I feel like you tackled some of the elements of that rather well.
Now I do think you played a little fast and loose with manakete biology, magic, and some of the laws of conservation of mass and energy, but that's sort of to be expected in this kink. Personally I found the entire part where Robin was digested and retained consciousness to be utterly surreal. There's out of body experiences, and then there's what this was... and this was bizarre as heck when it got to that point. More than half of this story is still the initial vore, trying to release Robin, some romantic stuff, and smut that I can get behind, so for me? It was still worth the read.
I do have to wonder if Nowi and Tharja is another RP session of yours that you haven't posted or I just haven't read yet, but I thought I should comment here first. My RP sessions are easily dwarfed in magnitude compared to what you've produced and I'm slightly in awe. 30 pages of back and forth tagging is pretty damn impressive, and with Fire Emblem awakening characters no less! I'd love to see what would happen if you managed to do something with Tiki at some point, but I digress.
So what would I change? ... Surprisingly nothing. I don't like scat and all that, but I wouldn't deny it for those who *do*. If anything I just want to see *more*. Like Robin finally getting to go down utterly nude, although obviously finding more bifrost staves would be realistically nearly impossible. There's probably one or two things that could be changed but when it's 30 pages worth of writing between two writers I don't think it's worth mentioning.
Anyways, I felt I should share my thoughts on it since it was such a long well written read. I *do* RP a large variety of Fire Emblem characters myself, so it's nice to see some well written fire emblem vore. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Posted by Updatedautopsy 4 years ago Report
Did you seriously bring up the laws of conservation of mass and energy in a vore story of a half dragon girl eating a dragon blood girl?
Posted by DissociatedChaos 4 years ago Report
I will admit, I was not expecting to have someone commenting on this four years after I posted it. I had almost forgotten I had ever uploaded any of my RPs to start with, honestly. :P
Posted by Updatedautopsy 4 years ago Report
Honestly, I just looked up Nah F/F and this was one of the only two to show up. Thought it was just really recent.
Posted by DissociatedChaos 4 years ago Report
Fair. Nah and Nowi really don't have enough stuff with them as predators in general. I've wound up digging up several year old stories or art for specific moods as well. Well, hope you enjoyed reading these old logs. ^.^
Posted by Lum_the_mad 4 years ago Report
I'll also admit, I'm surprised my comment got a response three years after I posted it, but I'm glad to see you saw my comment at least. It was a really great read and I had wanted to express that. ^_^
Posted by DissociatedChaos 4 years ago Report
Well, it also had me re-reading your comment and realizing I hadn't replied to it... three years ago when I meant to. XD
I really am glad that you enjoyed it though, and I appreciated the in depth comment. I admittedly haven't gotten to do any other Fire Emblem RPs - most of my RPs are with OC characters, custom settings, and things like that. But I do enjoy some fan work RPs like this every so often. Though they're a bit more work to make sure the characters are as faithful to their original personalities and voice as possible... while having them end up doing fetish stuff. :p
Posted by Lum_the_mad 4 years ago Report
Well I did say it was sort of to be expected with this kink :P But yes, I had meant it mostly as a joke! xD I'm well aware of how little has to make sense when it comes to magic, but it's always fun when writers go out of their way to be somewhat realistic with the science in their fantasy settings.