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Mavka tries to get Edovan safely back to his room and tucked in his bed, before the darker side of her tucks him someplace else, but she keeps running into complications.
Edovan is 4'9" Yagaritte is 9'0"
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Posted by JZaber 8 years ago Report
So the twins can see everything that goes on in the brothel? Man,I bet they've seen just about everything then.
Posted by mouseyman 8 years ago Report
lol well they ARE very powerful..lol but more like they have vision beyond human. Much like Edovan can see in the dark because he's a wood elf, the twin's can see heat because of what THEY are. As to what they are I'm sure you have figured it out by now xD
Posted by JZaber 8 years ago Report
Ah, so not complete picture then. Gotcha. Lol, that would have added a whole nother level or creep or kink to the twins and the brothel!
And given what i know now, I'd say I've definitely got an inkling of what they are ;).
(Of course, as a side note, that's given the Canon we're following; if this were the Tamriel: Modded-verse, I'd just as soon assume the twins were a Macho Man Randy Savage and a Thomas the Tank engine in a flesh skin suit. Could you imagine THAT reveal? Definitely omake material there! XD)
Posted by mouseyman 8 years ago Report
bahahahaha..love it!
Posted by Raydavidson 8 years ago Report
What are the twins supposed to be
Posted by mouseyman 8 years ago Report
go read back...I think you will figure it out XD
Posted by Gogglesguy66 8 years ago Report
The day this was posted I was extremely depressed and this cheers me up a lot I don't even read for the unbirth anymore it's just a great story and can't wait to read every word you post
Posted by saber25 8 years ago Report
Same here. While the unbirth is something to look forward to the ultimate prize is the story itself. Great storyline
Posted by mouseyman 8 years ago Report
Thank you so much! That makes us both very happy! We love the characters and the story too, so it is very gratifying to see that you do as well!
Posted by Belly97 8 years ago Report
What's happening with Part 15?
Posted by mouseyman 8 years ago Report
posting tomorrow! we are caught up to where we are writing now and My writing partner is in retail hell these days XD so now shes finished her part the rest of this for a while is my part and I've got plenty written to make posts once a week for now xD