Left crippled and alone, Yang makes a desperate wish to get revenge - a wish that is granted in a way she never would have predicted. All of Remnant saw her as a monster; now, it's about to see just how much of a monster she can really be.
Look out, Remnant, because there's a new apex predator on the block, and she remembers what you did. And she's just chomping at the bit for a taste of some sweet, delicious, munchy-crunchy VENGEANCE.

But, after all's been said and done, there's one thing left to tell you all...

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!



I'm ba-aack, everyone, and ho-ly shit, did this sucker take a lot longer than I expected it to! I've had the idea for this story a-brewing in my twisted brain for a long time coming now, but now, it's finally complete. I originally intended to publish this on Halloween, but RL problems meant that production was delayed for almost a week. Ultimately, though, I'm happy with what I ended up with.

I've wanted to write a story about post-Season 3 Yang getting her revenge for a while now, and I've seen a few fics that do it quite well (GlarnBoudin/Lediblock2's Bloody Evolution is a good example of it), but with my own twist. With Halloween coming up, I decided to play a little bit into the theme - I do love corrupting and twisting characters into monstrous, but still recognizable versions of themselves, especially if there's physical transformation involved. Ah, well - I suppose that with all the attention Rule 34 gets, someone's gotta uphold Rule #15 of the Internet: The more beautiful and pure something is, the more fun it is to corrupt. Granted, Yang's not exactly a flawless person, not by a long shot, but it was still a hell of a ride building the monster you now see before you.

In terms of design, well, I won't spoil too much, but in terms of raw statistics Yang's new form is about 10.5 feet tall and over two tons in weight, and her appearance was essentially concieved to be the unholy lovechild of a xenomorph and a Deathclaw. Beware, Remnant, beware; you have no idea of the hell that's been unleashed upon you.
Update (12/11/16): Reworked the entire thing; extended the dialogue, fixed typos, the works.

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