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this: https://aryion.com/g4/view/364338 but hopefully better.
This work is terrible! Look at this instead: https://aryion.com/g4/view/373866
I'm adding another option to the poll on my blog for redrawing old arts. Go vote for it here: https://aryion.com/forum/blog/Maiesen/so_many_things_to_do_b-30921.html
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Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
To be honest, I prefer the nose on the original. It looks better in general.
Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
I prefer the entire face of the original, I think it's much cuter.
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
Seconded.
Posted by Shortpig 8 years ago Report
The art is noticeably better, though I think that you've changed your style in the process. You may want to not sacrifice the pieces of your art that you identify as your own for the sake of bettering your pieces, especially given that already-high standards your work has.
Posted by Maiesen 8 years ago Report
I agree on everything that you've said. I'm still having trouble finding a style that I'm comfortable with. Maybe I should take a break and go some steps back.
Posted by sjkd34 8 years ago Report
hmmmmm...The old jogging is one of my favourite. To be honset, I just don't like her new nose and mouth. Her new face is completely different from the original. Everything else is better.( bulges,details and whatever) But her her left arm is a little small.( or her head is too big? )
Posted by Maiesen 8 years ago Report
Those are really valid points. I think I will revise it when I have time. Redraw it all over again if needed.
Posted by Maiesen 8 years ago Report
Just wanted to say thanks for all the criticisms. TBH, I don't like how this turns out either. I will be giving this another try.
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 8 years ago Report
Best of luck friend.
Posted by Sith 7 years ago Report
Wow the detail of that curled up human in her womb is just amazing. <3 Takes a really good artist to imagine out how another body would be sitting inside a belly like that~