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Amber's Desire By truth -- Report

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Since this is my first upload to this site, I might as well give a little introduction.

I'm not much of a writer. I have a total of three stories as of writing this description, and they're honestly really similar and generic. In my younger days I used to hate writing. A few years ago though, there was a few days where I could not get a specific set up out of my head.

They say one way of getting your thoughts in order is to write something down. So, I turned them into a short story. Granted, a very common type of story, but it was enough to clear my head.

I figured I might as well share them here because, well...why not? There's a lot of artists on this site already, but another reminder that none of us are alone is always good.

I'll upload the other two sometime this weekend, probably.

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DCarlC12

Posted by DCarlC12 8 years ago Report

A good start, but a few questions arise as I read this. First, how did Amber GET the serum, and how did she find the reader? These are things the reader would probably like to know. Despite this, I see a lot of potential in your work, and look forward to seeing more stories from you. Your writing style is very descriptive, and a more fleshed out story could benefit greatly from this. Although, I know exactly how you feel about writing. Taking a creative writing class really helped me with that. With that said, welcome to Eka's Portal!