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CONTAINS: Unbirth, Soft Vore, and Human Prey
This is my very first vore story, and it's a pretty long one, featuring a character of mine: A female, lioness taur named Freynoir. I had fun writing this, so I hope you all enjoy reading it!!
Artwork to go along with the story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/376498
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Posted by MMPluc 8 years ago Report
Well at least she knows that keeping a toy alive means more uses of said toy.
Posted by CalinBeast 8 years ago Report
Exactly! Now you're speaking my language!
Posted by MMPluc 8 years ago Report
Then again, my unbirth all has to do with Linking and a friendship of some level. So it isn't using a toy, but rather having a willing partner.
Posted by CalinBeast 8 years ago Report
I enjoy the relationship building between pred and prey just as you do. However, I like to spice it up a bit with an erotic sense of domination.
So I'd say that a relationship is still being built, things just get a little kinky when the pred is "feeling it". ;)
Posted by MMPluc 8 years ago Report
So will there be more to this, or is this just a once deal? Or will the pred find her way around?
Posted by CalinBeast 8 years ago Report
This story will most likely be a one shot deal. I'm not sure how often I'll actually write stories, considering that I spent most of my time making artwork.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 8 years ago Report
seconded
Posted by Mechdragon1k 8 years ago Report
The comment about the pred dominating yet in some way caring for the prey is what I mean
Posted by TalynWuff 8 years ago Report
Nice story~
Posted by Kaoru 8 years ago Report
For a first story, this is pretty good. :3 HECK, it's good in general, I won't demean that. I think you really conveyed how overwhelming the experience of being imprisoned is. This guy really gets a cold hard dose of reality and it hints at a fascinatingly-diverse, troubled world beyond. The action is tense. Freynoir is very likable, despite her rough exterior, and her dialogue is gripping and well-executed. All in all, can't wait for more! Although the all bold text is a curious formatting choice...
Posted by CalinBeast 8 years ago Report
That's good to hear!
As for the bold text, that wasn't intentional. I didn't realize it would appear that way as I was uploading it. o.o
Posted by simalst 8 years ago Report
Definitely ^-^ I enjoy this.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report
Great start at writimg
Posted by Poche26505 6 years ago Report
I really love this story! I hope you make a sequel to it some day