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With their team leader gone, Sakura and Hinata are the only ones left to take on Marunomi. But do they stand a chance?
So I actually ended re-writing and adding a lot to this chapter. Maybe I was just hitting writing fatigue, but, while the initial draft wasn't bad, I felt like more could have been done with it. Overall, I'm happy with the new version, and I hope you enjoy it.
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Posted by Scion 8 years ago Report
So I doubt that Marunomi will win in the end - do you do commissions?
Also what are your thoughts toward TF? As in the predator gains slight attributes or traits from those she's absorbed? Like highlights, body shape, markings etc
Posted by Nobodyman 8 years ago Report
Well, you'll just have to wait and see. And as of now, no, I do not do commissions. But I'll let you know if that changes.
And I'm all for TF. If I ever thought of a way to incorporate it into a story I would definitely use it.