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The Final Chapter!
Not much to this chapter. Just a quick little resolution to wrap everything. No vore I'm afraid, thought there is a bit of stuffing.
And with that, Naruto: The Hungry Ninja is over! I hope you all enjoyed reading it. I definitely enjoyed writing it.
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Posted by Flame14 8 years ago Report
Nice ending. Hope to see more Naruto related vore from you. Maybe next time we can see some of the girls partaking of some live meals themselves. Would love to see that, especially for Hinata.
Posted by Scion 8 years ago Report
Even though she didn't win - I enjoyed this nonetheless. Your descriptions of the action and fight scenes were excellent. Transitions to different parts of the story were smooth.
I really enjoyed the imagery and foreshadowing of her rubbery ability, especially being used after her artifact was destroyed.
My only complaint/critiscm I guess are the few character descriptions, I had to reread a few sections to get a full image of what she looked like.
Posted by Nobodyman 8 years ago Report
Super! I'm glad you liked it.
As for the character descriptions, I tried to give people a general idea of what Marunomi looked like, but wanted to leave the details up to their imaginations. Honestly, I'm not totally sure what Marunomi looks like in my mind, myself.
Posted by emilbootanimefreak 8 years ago Report
Nice ending to the story, would love to see this get turned into a comic.