Welcome one and all to another issue of
Cactus’ Comedic Composition Critiques. The story in this issue is
“[VORE] A nice mother” by GoldenSkarmory. As usual, the original
story is all italicized and has not been altered or edited in any way
aside from that and belongs to the original author. All
non-italicized text however belongs to me. So let’s get to looking
at this one, shall we?
Warning: it contains vore.
This is my first vore story, so
don't be cruel!
> Really, this is a vore st

The following italicized text belongs
to the deviantART user Tavin-Forchune and has not been altered in any
shape or form. I don’t own it at all and I have no intention of
wanting such a horrible excuse for a written work. The following
non-italicized text however belongs to me. Fun little tidbit about
this piece, it’s currently called “So much pokemon vore.” And
yes the period is in the title, I didn’t put it there. Anyway, its
original title from what I recall was something along the