Excellent story but I think there's part of it missing between April removing her shirt and leaning against the counter; there's no mention of her removing the rest of her clothes and all of sudden she's got a whisk inside of her.
Also would have been nice to see some responses from the boys on April's phone.
Posted by Benoven 8 years ago Report
A very good story.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 8 years ago Report
Thank you. I like your profile image, by the way (I should, since I was the one Jim drew it for).
Posted by Benoven 8 years ago Report
Cool. Then i must thank you for one of my fav pics
Posted by Werewolf-Hero 8 years ago Report
Would have been even better if she was served to Karai.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 8 years ago Report
That would be a very different story. One involving snake vore.
Posted by Werewolf-Hero 8 years ago Report
Could happen in an earlier season.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 8 years ago Report
Probably wouldn't have involved the selfie then. There's like half a season where that would have worked though.
Posted by Werewolf-Hero 8 years ago Report
Ohh okay my first hand knowledge of the show cuts out about at Ice Cream Kitty.
I got spoiled that Karai mutates and Bebop and Rocksteady show up that's about it.
Posted by MarcDioceco 3 years ago Report
Did you ever wrote a follow up where she is served to the turtle Murakami?
Posted by MarcDioceco 3 years ago Report
By Murakami*
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 3 years ago Report
I did not. if I had it would probably have been one or two paragraphs of epilogue on this story, not a full second story though.
Posted by MarcDioceco 3 years ago Report
Oki
Posted by johnno500 3 years ago Report
Excellent story but I think there's part of it missing between April removing her shirt and leaning against the counter; there's no mention of her removing the rest of her clothes and all of sudden she's got a whisk inside of her.
Also would have been nice to see some responses from the boys on April's phone.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 3 years ago Report
Good points. If I ever go back and revisit this story I'll fix that.