this was really nice! I really like this style of pred in which they have a vore fetish. That last scene before the epilogue was intense. it was just such a cruel betrayal, you did a great job. the way the witch helps her give into her sadistic desires was perfect! the way cara reacted and the way you described her thoughts was just soooo good. Wish more stories had scenes like that.
It was a nice story. The guy's nickname is really ironic by the way, as he is the only one who wouldn't become witch shit=)
Really looking forward to see more of Witchshit - I really liked his grim attitude. Continuation of this story featurng Cara would be great, too.
Thanks for liking and commenting,really glad you enjoyed the story! I have been thinking of continuing this one. I'm currently working on part 2 to my latest story so I may continue this one after that's finished.
Posted by sweetladyamy 8 years ago Report
Hmmm...
It's well written, but...
I dunno, it's missing something.
I'm not sure what, but it didn't hook me.
Still, very, very well written.
Posted by SuperfluousGreens 8 years ago Report
Exactly my thoughts as well! I think it could have done with a little more detail in the internal scenes, possibly.
Thanks for reading and commenting :)
Posted by mouth111 7 years ago Report
this was really nice! I really like this style of pred in which they have a vore fetish. That last scene before the epilogue was intense. it was just such a cruel betrayal, you did a great job. the way the witch helps her give into her sadistic desires was perfect! the way cara reacted and the way you described her thoughts was just soooo good. Wish more stories had scenes like that.
Look forward to reading more!
Posted by SuperfluousGreens 7 years ago Report
Really glad you enjoyed the story :D There's a few more in the pipeline!
Posted by Bautunnick 7 years ago Report
It was a nice story. The guy's nickname is really ironic by the way, as he is the only one who wouldn't become witch shit=)
Really looking forward to see more of Witchshit - I really liked his grim attitude. Continuation of this story featurng Cara would be great, too.
Posted by SuperfluousGreens 7 years ago Report
Thanks for liking and commenting,really glad you enjoyed the story! I have been thinking of continuing this one. I'm currently working on part 2 to my latest story so I may continue this one after that's finished.