Absolutely fantastic! Your work continues to improve and impress! I seemed to recall however that there was one final piece of dialogue in a black and white version I saw that is missing here. Am I remembering correctly? If so why did you remove it?
Yeah, there was a bit where Susan went on with something like "what sorry I didn't hear you oh well maybe I'll make this my territory blah blah blah." It didn't really add anything and didn't make sense for her to be talking to herself. Plus, I kinda liked how Riley just kinda got cut off mid-sentence and only had a satisfied expression as a response. Like, "You've been swallowed, conversation over."
Shadowfaps, it's great to see a new series of yours pop up here. The whole casual nature of Riley getting eaten and just accepting it is extremely surreal.
Like, I don't know. Riley is so full of character and so full of questions and then GULP! Silenced. Gone. Essentially dead to the world.
Posted by TheRealRt 8 years ago Report
Absolutely fantastic! Your work continues to improve and impress! I seemed to recall however that there was one final piece of dialogue in a black and white version I saw that is missing here. Am I remembering correctly? If so why did you remove it?
Posted by Shadowfaps 8 years ago Report
Yeah, there was a bit where Susan went on with something like "what sorry I didn't hear you oh well maybe I'll make this my territory blah blah blah." It didn't really add anything and didn't make sense for her to be talking to herself. Plus, I kinda liked how Riley just kinda got cut off mid-sentence and only had a satisfied expression as a response. Like, "You've been swallowed, conversation over."
Posted by Zaxivlon 8 years ago Report
The casualness of casualty... trademark shadowfaps. =)
Posted by AtmosRobot 8 years ago Report
Shadowfaps, it's great to see a new series of yours pop up here. The whole casual nature of Riley getting eaten and just accepting it is extremely surreal.
Like, I don't know. Riley is so full of character and so full of questions and then GULP! Silenced. Gone. Essentially dead to the world.
Posted by IddlerItaler 1 year ago Report
"I should be blocking your windpipe."
"What is a windpipe?"
"...Huh. you know, that just raises more questions-"
I love this back and forth.