Posted by Slayerhero90 8 years ago Report

it looks kinda like the pred's gut's been smushed over towards our left, which i don't think is what you were going for here

i'm absolutely certain the belly-button needs to be moved towards the right due to the added depth of a full belly, possibly out-of-view altogether, since it's currently sitting right where it would if the pred had a flat stomach

i also think the left contour of the belly might look better if it wasn't a contour at all. i recognize it's a little hard to show the mass of the belly with the prey obstructing a significant portion of the view, but i think the bottom part of the contour, combined with the belly-button being moved, will still be enough to indicate the pred's fullness

rad shoulders on the pred tho

Posted by Desire122 8 years ago Report

ya i had some difficulties to draw the volume of the belly (due to the obstructing prey,as you said)
You are so right on the belly-button! I didn't think about that!
Anyway, thank you for writing some feedback, that is what i meant!
It's useful because now i know these errors and i will try avoid them and improve.

Posted by TimeToRun 8 years ago Report

Great drawing! Love the situation:)

Posted by eatashley 8 years ago Report

Oh my god your art just keeps getting better! Love it!

Posted by Desire122 8 years ago Report

Thx guys!

Posted by Lilykitty 8 years ago Report

Could you make more pictures like that of Fran or final fanatsy girls? The way you drew the post-vore scat was beautiful <//3

Posted by Desire122 8 years ago Report

I'm working on something similar!

Posted by Lilykitty 8 years ago Report

Nice!, I am anxious to see it! X//3