Posted by Lucky 8 years ago Report

I gotta say, this is some outstanding work.

You really captured the relegation of a person to food excellently. The amount of sex she had with Spot prior to being ingested seemed excessive to me at first, but played into distracting her from getting eaten on time very well. I felt really awkward along with her as she was carried downstairs in Spot's mouth, really fretting how that interaction would go, but you used it very deftly to build upon a sexy theme. Kudos!
I really dig the subtle hint of Amanda being groomed for Spot's next meal; great respect for the reader, good visual detail, perfect implication.

I would have loved to see another scat scene, but I admit that you finished strong with where you ended.

If you want something to work on, please focus on staying in a single tense and do another run for spelling and unnecessary apostrophes, but content-wise you're spot-on.

Would love to see more stuff from you! Dogs are amazing preds. <3

Posted by unicorn 8 years ago Report

This is pretty great. I enjoyed reading it on the forum and am happy to see you got a gallery! Now i won't miss future updates :D

Posted by deaddanny 8 years ago Report

I love M/f dog vore.

Posted by donutbrittle 8 years ago Report

Ashley is perfect, exactly what I love about vore.

I hate Amanda and I wish I hadn't read any more than the first two chapters.

Posted by JackMeoff135 7 years ago Report

Im so confused, do those who get eaten by spot stay dead, cause it seems like in the begining with the brother that he'd come back to life at some point. Idk, Im not a bright cookie.

Posted by MisterBad 7 months ago Report

Eaten. Digested. Dead. But Spot is able to continue on because of it. :)