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Give in to Temptation By Draconatedz -- Report

A story that I couldn't help but form while playing Persona 5. There are heavy spoilers to the game, so read at your own risk!

Shadow Sae was so hot, I had to make something of her. Makoto was probably my favorite girl, so what better way to honor her than to have her digested by her hot, unromancable sister? That'll show these dumb devs!

I thought it was really strange a cognitive version of Makoto was absent from Sae's palace, so I decided to show my take on what sort of view she'd have of her younger sister.

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Kelly

Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report

x3 <3

VertGreenHeart

Posted by VertGreenHeart 7 years ago Report

Yayyyyy Makoto vore!!

darklord42

Posted by darklord42 7 years ago Report

Yeah How about next time Hav Her sister make her a slut with her female friend

SirVile67

Posted by SirVile67 7 years ago Report

I didn't read the fic, but just looking at the thumbnail felt like a spoiler... D:

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 7 years ago Report

The game has been out over a month, long enough for me to complete it.

It's been out for over a year if you count the japanese version.

SirVile67

Posted by SirVile67 7 years ago Report

Yeah, but I haven't completed it yet. :(

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 7 years ago Report

Well, I apologise if you felt spoiled from it. Considering that's the central character of the fic, I stand behind having her be the thumbnail.

SirVile67

Posted by SirVile67 7 years ago Report

Makoto probably would have been a smarter choice for the thumbnail.

Godeater

Posted by Godeater 7 years ago Report

Yes some persona vore nice work it really capture the shadow personality.

Spoiler do not Read past this unless you completed the game and true ending. Apologies in advance for geek out mode.



The reason why Mokoto didn't appear in San Palace is based on her cognition of the legal courthouse system and about rigging cases to win no matter what. Due to Mokoto having no connection to Sae distorted desire of Justice she doesn't have a presence in the palace.

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 7 years ago Report

Yeah, but there are many scenes in the game where Sae flat out tells Makoto she's a burden, or 'owes' it to her to do as she says because she spends so much of her life taking care of her.

My reasoning for the lack of a subservient Makoto cognition is because they probably didn't want her to look too evil or black hearted, she does become your ally without actually having her heart stolen.

VertGreenHeart

Posted by VertGreenHeart 7 years ago Report

Actually I'm betting Cognitive Makoto is either at Shujin or in their home.
Though idk why the director or Akechi isn't in there either.
If Akechi was there he probably would have pointed it out himself or
:SPOILER:


Killed the cognitive version himself thinking that Sae would somehow knows of Akechi's true nature.

blazeveritas

Posted by blazeveritas 6 years ago Report

so good i couldnt stop reading

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report

Okay this was good. I recently watched a Playthrough and Sae’s was one of my favorite palaces in the game given the interesting themes and twist in Sae having such a palace.
Though if I had to give a reason why Cognitive Makoto didn’t show up was because Sae doesn’t associate Makoto with the Court too much and she’d probably be back at there house. Like with Cognitive Akira being in the interrogation room in the Metaverse.