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The Boy and The Secretary By AegisOfRoses -- Report

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A boy goes to meet his father and gets a surprise when the secretary shrinks.

Decided that I didn't like where the original was going, and I got a little side tracked from what the story was originally supposed to be, so I just restarted. Any suggestions are appreciated.

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saintheartwing

Posted by saintheartwing 7 years ago Report

Well, there should be a bit of a fix with the spacing, other than that, I rather liked the ending quite a bit. Her resting up against the mouse was quite an intriguing way to end it.

AegisOfRoses

Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report

I'm not sure why the spacing came out that way, but I'll be sure to try some experimentation with my next upload. And sometimes the cutest things can turn to the scariest, given a little time...

Nevek

Posted by Nevek 7 years ago Report

I loved the tape part. Good job.

AegisOfRoses

Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report

Thanks! It was actually a coincidence that it happened, as I just so happened to need something taped while I was writing!