Posted by Ty975 7 years ago Report

Well fuck....so many emotions...

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

...In a good way?

Posted by Ty975 7 years ago Report

Yeah. The internal volley between wanting her to live on for Josh's sake and to give in to Carissa's desire was real bruh.
Definitely one of your most stirring stories since 'Wem', though my one complaint being the lack of impact the consequence seems to have on the characters.
Either way, highly enjoyed it! Always great stuff from you :)

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks. I admit, I too was torn between wanting her to live on with Josh, and wanting Carissa to enjoy her to the full. I'm glad if that played in as part of the suspense.

Well, what we've seen of the consequences so far is that Carissa's friendship with Pat has become strained, and that all three of them are going to have to deal with unexpected parenthood.

Posted by DontTellMyWife 7 years ago Report

Wow! What a rollercoaster. I enjoyed reading it but I'm desperate for more. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment ;)

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks. I did want to keep up a bit of suspense! The next installment might not be straight away, since I've got several non-IVC stories I want to write before that. But when we come to it, it will be the regional qualifier. Patricia and Carissa will probably be competing against each other again. Although... If she's eight months pregnant, will Carissa really be able to? Or have recent events ruined her chance to make it to the next vore competition? Dun-dun-duuun...

Posted by josiesshrinkkink 7 years ago Report

That was a long teasing story! Just finished reading. I absolutely loved it but I feel a little cheated that no one got eaten. But it does mean that we don't have to say goodbye to Patricia (and Josh?) just yet. In my opinion these are your best characters but I do hope Carissa gets her wish fulfilled. I felt quite sorry for her in the end traveling all that way only to be disappointed.
I can't wait for the IVC qualifiers story (become I'm going to be in it? Maybe) to see what happens next (will Patricia become food for her boyfriends baby?)
I'm so excited!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Hehe. Thanks. (And welcome to the Portal!) Poor Carissa, she felt a bit cheated too... She might not be giving up on her hopes of swallowing Patricia, though. And hopefully she'll be able to fill her tummy with wiggly people during the regional qualifiers. (If she's not too heavily pregnant to compete!)

Posted by aliwantstobeeaten 7 years ago Report

Gah! I'm conflicted. I really like Patricia but by the point she was shrunk and inside Carissa's mouth I really wanted her to be swallowed.

Keep this story thread going please. I'm craving more of this trio.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Ha; thanks. I'm glad you're conflicted. :D That even though you like Patricia, the vore was appealing enough for you to want her to be swallowed. And for poor Carissa not to be deprived of her treat!

We'll definitely be seeing them all again.

Posted by Mouthplayer 7 years ago Report

Hi. This is "orangeshamrock" - the Irishman with the Dutch girlfriend from DA. I thought I had better create a profile on Eka's where it seems the real vore aficionados hang out.

I only started reading the IVC stories recently. Me and my girlfriend love them, Patricia is one of our favourite characters (Sahiba is our number one) so we both enjoyed this story very much. It was so intense! Personally I would have liked there to have been some actual vore and I was hoping that Josh would say yes, but at the same time I want him to also get eaten.
My girlfriend liked the dynamic between Carissa and Patricia and said she's glad Josh rescued her, not because she doesn't want Carissa to eat Patricia but because she didn't feel the circumstances were right. Patricia should be the one who decides if she gets swallowed.

Keep up the good work. We love the IVC, your characters invoke emotions so we cannot wait until the next part. How will the pregnancy affect them all?

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks; glad you both enjoyed it! I did feel a bit bad about not letting Carissa swallow Patricia. Even though Carissa is obviously a fictional character, I felt her disappointment. ;) But of course, it does mean the interactions between her and Patricia and Josh can continue.

And indeed, how are all three of them going to cope with the pregnancy? Josh will need to take on responsibilities as a dad, but how can he raise a baby with Carissa, in another country, when he's living with Patricia? And will the pregnancy affect Carissa's ability to compete? We shall see...

In any case, Josh seems to be off the menu for now. What with his sudden parental responsibilities, and with Patricia having decided she's in love with him. Although, the unexpected can always happen...

Posted by passingthroughyou 7 years ago Report

OMG! That was intense.

I like vore stories when an established character gets eaten but I'm glad you haven't killed off the lovely Patricia just yet. We need more of her...but she won't be able to resist that desire to be swallowed forever!

I suspect you have another twist up your sleeve with these three?

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks. Patricia certainly still feels the temptation to be swallowed. All I can say is, we'll be seeing these three characters again, and seeing how their relationship progresses. :)

Posted by bedfordsb 7 years ago Report

That's good news!

Posted by Kasra 7 years ago Report

Really nicely done! You did a great job keeping it up in the air how things were going to go, right up until the end. Josh's participation was perfect, and the results seem like they'll lead to interesting stories in the future.

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And that the suspense worked well! Josh would certainly have found pleasure in feeling and seeing Patricia slide down Carissa's throat, into her hot tummy... but in the end, he had stronger reasons to make the opposite choice.

Posted by TheWiking2000 7 years ago Report

Teasing, that would be one word to summarize this story, if in an alternate universe one word ever could.

The back-and-forth between Carissa and Patricia, and the throwbacks to their previous endevors, was really enjoyable, as were the scenes with more physical interactions. The explicit toilet scenes I kind of skimmed over, but the idea of it, what had transpired within both of their bodies, was an enjoyable concept.

How they both manage to stay so thin on such a diet of pizzas and burgers and desserts (and tons of tinies) is beyond me, though! I guess tiny people are the most healthy thing they eat ;)

I would of course have liked for Carissa to fulfill her fantasy and gulp Patricia down, and perhaps send Josh down to keep her company, but we can't always get what we want, now can we? Still not too late for that, though, and this does set the stage for some future drama in the upcoming IVC:s! Would a pregnant Carissa even be allowed to compete? I guess we'll find out!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

I had fun developing Carissa and Patricia's interactions and relationship. And poor Carissa was teased as much as the readers here! :)

Ha, it seems most readers would have liked Patricia to have been irretrievably swallowed down. A smooth little gulp, Patricia all gone forever, and a very satisfied Carissa! Carissa might hope she can still make it happen. Though for now, her relationship with Patricia and Josh looks as if it might take a somewhat different turn.

As for diet, they were on holiday when they ate those pizzas and burgers. I assume they eat more healthily at other times. Or perhaps those were low-fat, healthy burgers... ;)

Posted by Indighost 7 years ago Report

Just popping in to say I really like your wonderful idyllic bathroom scenes, i dont see them often from you but i love them a lot. I found myself liking the characters less as the story went on, reducing the emotional impact, but i can absolutely say your writing skills and sentence structure crafting is always getting better and better :) its really nice to see that someone in the vore community is not just committed for long years but also committed to always improving :) Thank you for doing so! ♡

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thanks for the comment. Not sure Carissa found it "idyllic" having to spend a long time on the toilet, but I'm glad you enjoyed it for her. :D

Posted by Indighost 7 years ago Report

Its just how you write, it sounds so peaceful and relaxing xD I love it! ♡

Posted by lazylayjay 7 years ago Report

Before I read this story I was sure that this would be Patricia's last because it wasn't about the actual IVC and I expecting her to be written out with this as way of explaining her absence from the competition.
The outcome was intense, I found myself torn between wanting Carissa to get her wish but also for Patricia to survive because I thought the whole scenario was unfair on Josh. It perhaps would have easier if she had eaten him and then let Carissa have her. But to ask him to decide her fate was very mean indeed.
This was an unusual vore story in that it didn't actually have any vore in it but didn't diminish the experience. It was probably the least 'fun' of all the IVC stories because of the tension but what a whirlwind of emotions!

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad it had that effect. Yes, Patricia sometimes neglects to consider the effects of her decisions and desires on other people...