Posted by preved_yt 7 years ago Report

Finally vore with her. I mean with onscreen mid-swallowing and throat bulge, just as I like to see it

Posted by Ilove 7 years ago Report

That's why it's so nice to draw her, throat bulges and frog girls go so well together!

Posted by Negator 7 years ago Report

Tsuyu is popular because she has a great attitude, and the similar face she always has no matter what's happening around her is great. :D

Lovely bulge work here. Also damn good getting the art style for the characters as well. <3

Posted by Ilove 7 years ago Report

Thanks, it's not that big of a deal drawing her, the art style it's really simple, and that is just awesome! Gotta love My Hero Academia :)

Posted by Gabriel0813 7 years ago Report

nice work

Posted by Ilove 7 years ago Report

Thx happy you like it ;)

Posted by N7Slayer 7 years ago Report

Aww, it's quite a cute and fortunate accident <3

Great work, keep it up :)

Posted by Ilove 7 years ago Report

Thanks man, all for cuteness sake ;)

Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report

Definitely one of your better pieces on here, and quite honestly probably your best one too. It helps that you didn't base it off another artist's picture too; originality is always important. You got some decent line quality, you've got the show's relatively simple artstyle down well, and I really like Tsuyu's facial reactions to the fly on Ochako's head, as well as the fact that you're intentionally keeping the 'mogabulge' stuff going, haha.

Definite bonus too for drawing Ochako's feet in Tsuyu's throat, since feet are usually quite hard to get down just right. Plus mid-swallow shots, always good. And while this is a personal thing I like, I do enjoy how you drew Ochako's bangs poking out a bit through Tsuyu's stomach. Minor detail but, I always liked this.

Course, my biggest complaint would likely have to be how you represented Ochako being swallowed into Tsuyu. A bit of an odd choice to portray it that way. I think, had you just gone with a more typical way, you could've avoided how sorta out of place that part of the picture seems. I think the term is 'immersion breaking'.

Still, good work man. I hope to see more outta you like this, and more and greater works too.

Posted by Ilove 7 years ago Report

Thanks man, that's some great feedback right here!
I myself think this is one of my best works, mostly because it went from a simple idea to a complete sequence and the fact that is not based on models as you said is a plus :)
I'm quite happy you got the minor details, like the feet in Tsuyu's throat. It doesn't happen often to receive feedback for such things.
As for the part in where Ochako is being swallowed into Tsuyu i think you intend the segment where she catches Uraraka with her tounge right? That is surely the weakest part of the sequence, i agree. I've tried to do something more ironic/dinamic for that, but it was hard without a background to work with, next time if i do something similar i'm gonna see how to do it best.
For the mogabulge i'm just in love with that way of doing bellies, it's much more realistic ( and works best with frog girls ;) ).
With all of this said, thanks again man, gonna do my best to keep getting better works out here.
See you soon ;)

Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report

That's one thing you can expect from me; A wall of text involving detailed feedback, ahaha.
I'm glad you agree with pretty much everything I said. Granted there's nothing wrong with using a picture for, say, outfit references or poses. But it's always much better I feel to make the rest your own, you know?

And yep, I was referring to where Uraraka was hit by Tsuyu's tongue. The stretching of an image and, fact that Uraraka's feet are cut off are definite negatives. I can't blame you for struggling with something more action-y and dynamic, but it definitely did hurt the picture a bit. At the very least you're aware of this, and that makes it a bit better. I very much look forward to what you do next time with a sequence like that.

And heck yeah I agree, haha. Some like the big round ones (which I find are a little lazy, kinda), but I like em tighter. Makes it easier to know who's in there you know? More embarrassing. (･ω･´)

Pleasure to speak with you, of course. ｀･ω･)9

Posted by delete35h0026tb26b9 7 years ago Report

Beautiful art

Posted by Ilove 7 years ago Report

Happy you like it ;)

Posted by delete35h0026tb26b9 7 years ago Report

Yeah

Posted by delete35h0026tb26b9 7 years ago Report

I wish I was in her stomach

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Hmm, maybe Tsuyu should digest Ochako first!