Very nice. Wonder if she'll get a contract to go after this Soleil chick next, that looks like it could be fun. It will be another mage to eat at least, the world has too many spellcasters anyways. Rather see their magic create beautiful brown art than be wasted on petty things like saving the kingdom.
Posted by Duke1911 7 years ago Report
Great story~ I absolutely love the taunting, and really enjoy when the prey realizes what they will become.
Posted by AndAnotherOne 7 years ago Report
Very nice. Wonder if she'll get a contract to go after this Soleil chick next, that looks like it could be fun. It will be another mage to eat at least, the world has too many spellcasters anyways. Rather see their magic create beautiful brown art than be wasted on petty things like saving the kingdom.
Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report
A really good description of a fight scene.