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Jaune get's captured by Torchwick and has to endure a horrific time with time with Neo. This is based of an interactive I did a while back where the protagonist was in a similar situation: https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2094685-Female-Padded-Predators-of-the-Media/map/121333333111112211111211112222111111112211313112121222312222111111321
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Posted by techtician 7 years ago Report
That was great. I really need to get my diapered pred Neo story written.
Posted by RobobroXT 7 years ago Report
Thanks. I worried a bit that the story could be a bit bad because I'm german.
Posted by techtician 7 years ago Report
Nah its good, the only thing I would have done is extended the disposal scene but other than that.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
not often you see a Digestion story with Jaune being digested.
Normally it's the girls eating other girls.
Posted by RobobroXT 7 years ago Report
Yeah. I thought so too. But to be honest, Jaune was kinda the only guy I could think of who could be captured by someone.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
I can see anyone capturing then eating Jaune.
Posted by RobobroXT 7 years ago Report
What I meant was Jaune is the only guy who could be captured by someone else because he can't defend himself that well at that part of the story. If I would, for example, put Sun in this situation, he wouldn't even be captured.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
true,