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So, I've been debating whether to post this to my profile here or not for a long while now. This is my absolute best story to date in terms of quality and my personal fetishes, but I didn't think it would fit in with my gallery of vore stories.
but, I havent posted anything in a while (that will soon change) and I wanted to put this out there simply because of how proud I am of how far I've come.
Fair warning both in the title and the top of the story, but most of you wont like it.
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Wow such an amazing story ~ <3
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Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Thank you, it means a lot to hear! I was worried about what the reception would be to this one, but I'm glad to hear that you liked it~
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Its amazingly written and definitly one of my favorite stories I have read on here ~ The feeling of power over her gets me to feel soooo much >~< Its really amazing I hope there maybe be some new adventures of them ~ Its in my top 10 of stories I had the pleasure of reading <3 thank you for sharing
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Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Trust me, I plan on writing about them some more eventually :3
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Oh my ~ I cant freaking wait this was just toooo perfect and the small things really sold the story for me : Like the part with touching herself without beeing feed and the teasing and the part with the warm and round belly that could be molded a bit and even the slow buildup in the car ~ Everything just falles perfectly together ~ <3
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Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
The quality really shows when its a story im really interested in, it seems! I've been feeling way more passionate and excited to work on stories like this, rather than normal vore stories recently .
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
The most importent thing is that you enjoy your writing ~ That your happy in the end and people will be along for the ride ~ So do the stories you want to write and the people will come ~ :3 It really showed that you put your passion into it ^-^
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Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Hehe, heah. Once commissions are finally finished, im going to be writing a lot of stuff like this along with more traditional vore stuff. I just hope that a day will come when i get *asked* to write stuff like this~
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Hehe ~ Maybe next month when I could have some money loose this could happen :P Cant wait for more of that stuff ~ Maybe even in combination of vore x3 Loved this story soooo much hehe Well stay who you are end wrtie what you enjoy I will be definitly here to watch ~
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Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Why thank you, any support is always appreciated! Ive got no clue when my commissions will open up next, but honestly if im free I might end up taking one along these lines regardless.
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Hehe id totaly be up to work in your parameters of what you would enjoy writing when it comes to that :P ^-^ Well for now I cant wait what you will turn out in the mean time :3 Keep it up buddy
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Poke x3 Still an amazing story ~
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Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
I'm glad you still enjoy it! I've been thinking of writing a sequel to this one sometime, once I'm caught up of some other projects <3
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Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Uhhhhhhh that would be lovely <3 If you decide on doing it I will probably be all over it
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Posted by tinoapple 6 years ago Report
I was kinda turned off the story because of the way you portrayed both characters.
The whole thing seemed almost, abusive?
Like i sorta felt like Fiora was low-key torturing Rachel for more than half of the whole story,with little to no relief from the endless plummeting of the constant shit (figurative) that her girlfriend puts her trough.
What especially didn't sit with me right was
"She felt like she would die from the attention, nearly bursting into tears as people stared on."
Theres a few other things too but this comments already too long.
I hope this doesn't make you upset, and i want to say that i do really enjoy your other work!
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Posted by Cryos 6 years ago Report
Fair enough, everyone has their opinion! Its not going to upset me to know you disagree with how I portray my characters. Personally, I like dom/sub relationships like this, but I get that not everyone else does.
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Posted by Indighost 5 years ago Report
fantastic! It manages to be super kinky while also believeable
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Posted by Cryos 5 years ago Report
Im glad to hear you liked it! I try to walk that line with these two a lot. Now if I could just get around to finishing the sequel I'm writing...
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Posted by Kelly 1 year ago Report
Still one of the best things on here if you ask me :3
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