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A birthday gift for my good friend Redfighter345 over on DA who has been kind enough to do several gifts for myself and other people. You truly deserve this and I hope you like it. Happy Birthday.
This is a follow up to my other story found here:
https://davodbraker.deviantart.com/art/RWBY-One-Shot-Bonding-with-Belladonna-Bellies-710802566
Jaune's stay at Blake's parents gets even more hectic when a surprise visitor appears.
Hope you all enjoy.
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Posted by domino142005 6 years ago Report
You should do a story where some White Fang members come looking for Blake and she eats them all but gets a stomachache from eating so much in one sitting and Jaune gives her an awesome belly rub.
Posted by Davyjones 6 years ago Report
That is a good idea, belly rubs from one's boyfriend sounds awesome sadly I've got a list of other stories to get through first.
Glad you liked this one though
Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
'Her EYES flatten with anger' i think you meant her ears.
Posted by Davyjones 6 years ago Report
Whoops. Thanks for pointing that out
Posted by Ironf1st 5 years ago Report
Have you considered a potential version of this where Ilia does actually digest Blake and Jaune? Maybe eaten by the mother after?
Posted by Davyjones 5 years ago Report
I have not considered it though that's a good idea. The problem I have with making alternate endings is that I'd rather move on to newer and fresher ideas rather than re-hash a whole story just to modify the ending.
Posted by Ironf1st 5 years ago Report
fair enough, although it is also an easy way to get content out while you're between ideas/suffering from any form of writers block, plus it lets you maybe test certain ideas out in a format where you can see whether or not people like the new idea more than maybe a more esatblished method on the same story. either way, obviously it's up to you but I always preferred things like multi-ending stories when writing so that I can break my ideas up and not have them get in the way of each other.
Posted by Davyjones 5 years ago Report
All fair points. I shall take them into consideration.