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Tags: apples background Lendia Non-Vore orchard
Its a lovely day to go out into the world and visit a lovely apple orchard, though it looks like Lendia (belonging to AshleyDScott) is wondering just why you're here wandering into HER orchard. I hope you have a good reason to be here!
A commission for AshleyDScott, was a fun excuse to paint trees again. :3
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Posted by RavenXeo 7 years ago Report
her pretty face is reason enough<3
Posted by MenchiCutlets 7 years ago Report
D'aww, I'm sure she would appreciate hearing that. ^^
Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report
I like the background you did for this one. And the colors used make the scene feel pretty peaceful, even if some shenanigans are going on behind her.
Course, a few improvements here and there can always be made, specially for Lendia here. Her legs are much, muuuch longer in proportion to her torso than they should be, and her knees look as if they should be a bit higher up. Her elbows feel perhaps like they're leaning forward, towards the viewer, a bit more than intended, along with the arms in general looking a bit lumpy. Hands and fingers are always tough to do, but in this case they certainly could have used a bit more attention. As is they look a bit like sticks.
I will say though, you did make her face very pretty. A good shape for the head, and the eyes, mixes and works very well with how angled and sharp they are. I like it.
Posted by MenchiCutlets 7 years ago Report
I will say, I purposefully made her legs a bit longer because she is a horse based character, and to try to emphasise her leaning forward a bit (that might not have come through very well, will need to work on that). I do however appreciate the constructive critism and will keep it in mind for future works. Thank you for the comment. :)
Posted by hibbyjibby 7 years ago Report
While I definitely do understand the viewpoint of her being a horse character and such, if she's got human proportions for the most part, and what looks like human feet, it doesn't really mesh super well does it? Atleast I think so, though it's not a super hard-committing rule if you mix in animal traits. Still, unusual combination.
I did think she was leaning forward a tad, but as you did mention it was tough to notice, though not impossible or anything. Shading/shadows underneath her chin and on her chest would've given that much appreciated depth to it, and probably achieve that look you were going for.
Regardless, it's good that you still have that motivation to keep at it. Any mistake is just a lesson you can learn from to not repeat again.