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This is a raffle story for SwordkingX5 with an alternate take on the ending of season 5.
Note - There are some dumb mistakes in this story. And whilst I'm not fully re-uploading this the best I can do is send a link to the DA version where the changes have been made.
https://hungrydumpty.deviantart.com/art/Yang-s-Fiery-Meal-728152062
Character Reference
Yang - https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/rwby/images/4/47/Yang_Vol_5_Profile.png/revision/latest?cb=20171017205551
Cinder - https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/rwby/images/e/e8/Vol4_Cinder_Concept_Art.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20170215214353
Emerald - https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/rwby/images/9/9f/V3e4_emerald_concept_art.png/revision/latest?cb=20151130065522
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Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 7 years ago Report
Noice. What's the thumbnail image?
Posted by hungrydumpty 7 years ago Report
Much like all of my thumbnails they're from google images so I don't know the specifics.
https://pictures.hentai-foundry.com/s/SirWogDog/543071/SirWogDog-543071-Yang_Doms_Cinder.jpg
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 7 years ago Report
Thanks mate; I know a friend who's gonna love this.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
Great work.
Minor thing, It's Qrow not Crow.
Otherwise this was great work as always.
Posted by hungrydumpty 7 years ago Report
*cough* I-I know that! I was just...umm testing you! Y-yeah and you passed! Congratulations!
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Auto corrects a b***h.
Posted by RedLikeRuby 7 years ago Report
Nice story but fyi, Raven isn't Rubys mother
Posted by hungrydumpty 7 years ago Report
Wow, I really did screw up this story first using Crow instead of Qrow and now this. Ha ha, whelp this is what happens when you don't do your proper research I guess.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Can you edit to fix it (never posted a story on this site so no idea).
Posted by hungrydumpty 7 years ago Report
Had a go at re-uploading it however it isn't working, the best I can do is put a link to the DA version since I know I can change it there.
Posted by RedLikeRuby 7 years ago Report
Well know you know for future stories
Posted by hungrydumpty 7 years ago Report
True. Usually I'm a lot more diligent when it comes to this sort of thing but I guess I felt confident enough with the source material to go against it and push on. (Granted I did rush myself so that didn't help)
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Speaking of future stories, i would love to see sequals to this, or possibly prequals, with Yang's early victims.