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Chapter 7 of The Five Goddesses, in which Kalia faces her sister Ashera, the goddess of wind.
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Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report
Hey Nobodyman, glad you updated. Seriously I was looking forward to this one as it would have Kalia facing against the Wind Goddess Ashera. I'll do what I can for this one given. But this chapter review won't be as long. So here it goes.
With the flash back of Demi with her training with Ashera. This shows the kind of character that the wind goddess is. Silent and serious like her element too. Though I imagine how tough it was for Demi having to deal with the training of said element too. She never lets Demi get any openings in attacking her straight away. Not to mention that it must've been rough for Demi to be trained like that. Not to mention annoying given how Ashera always stays silent save for that one moment. I must say that it's pretty impressive with how you written Ashera's character during the whole chapter. Mostly with how Ashera was training Demi with his element and surroundings.
Now onto the fight itself. To briefly say I am impressed with how you've written on how the fight between Kalia and Ashera is rather intense. The way you've written the way they've used their powers remind me of the battles of Avatar: The Last Airbender animated series. The description and effort that you've put into the battle was very intense, just like the previous chapters. Though I must say if I had to choose amongst the battles, both Ashera and Minerva's battles with Kalia are the best. And what a way for her to go by speaking in the last moment just before she was swallowed up by Kalia. Though I must say that the way Kalia was able to devour Ashera was rather simple and quick but fitting given. It's good that you did it so that each time Kalia swallows one of her sisters it won't sound redundant. All in all nice.
You really did good on this chapter and I can't wait to see both Tiama and Demi in the next chapter as well as what the former is about tell her. I can't wait to see it. So laters and keep up the good work.
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by Nobodyman 7 years ago Report
Great! Glad you liked it. As always, thanks for your review BlueMarvel.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report
Yeah, and trust me that I look forward to the next chapter. I'd like to see what happens. And also your grammar and spelling's good as always with some minor details to work out. So keep up the good work. Let me know when it comes out. Laters!