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I wanted to write a story with just softvore this time so I thought about a situation in which it would be most reasonable to do. It is not related to my previous contend other than the frame of the world. Somehow I managed to write quite a lot after the vorepart, which I had initially meant to be the finale and followed only by some few finishing sentences. Now…well it did get out of hand, I can’t deny it.
“Parts written like this are spoken”
‘Parts written like this are thoughts’
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Posted by Ignoreme79 7 years ago Report
this was brilliant. I felt like the characters were real people and the setting and descriptions let my imagination run wild. you truly made me connect with the characters and the world. Well done!
Posted by hexagon 7 years ago Report
WoW! Thank you very much!
I am amazed you liked it that much and really happy about your kind words! Truthfully!
Posted by Ignoreme79 7 years ago Report
no problem! I am a bit of a bookworm so I like to think I know a good story when I read one. I even worked as a librarian for a few years and was always known as the person to ask for recommendations. I can honestly say that your story was extremely well paced and structured. That can be really hard to do with these types of survival stories. By the end the relationship between the leads felt earned, which is also hard to do with romance stories. What I'm basically trying to say is that I mean it when I say you really made a great story here and I can't wait to read from you again.
Posted by hexagon 7 years ago Report
I can only repeat myself by tanking you and very much like the little feedback you gave me.
I can't really say that I write on a regular basis, mostly when I have an idea and the time. But the good news is, I have a new idea allready, considering my timescedule, I don't know how fast I will be. Also I am afraid it will be a bit of a long story...
Somehow all my works turn out way longer than I had thought.
Posted by POPOMOHA 7 years ago Report
great as always BRAVO
Posted by hexagon 7 years ago Report
Thank you very much!