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Hi there!
It has been a while since I last uploaded anything here, but it is finally finished.
Well, it got rather out of hand and now I’m sitting on a story that comes closer to half of a book than just a quick read.
It does of course contain what this site is mainly about, but, as in most of my stories, has a rather large framework around it as well as the sexy time.
It took me so long, because in the meantime I did study a semester abroad, finished my degree and took on a job, but most of all, because I’m lazy :).
The general topic is: A bunch of people are send out to take care of trouble and during that the opportunity arises, to fit in what this site is all about. The Framework is closely related to the content around Erov city and the rules for this world apply here as well.
I did prove read it but please bear with me if there are misspellings or strange phrasings. If there are any kinds of trouble, feel free to ask me.
Thoughts i underlined
Speech I wrote in cursive.
<------> indicates a sudden swich in person or perspective of speech
And, well, stay save in 2020!
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Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
I'm impressed. I like long stories, and this one was very long. I have to admit, I did not read it entirely and skiped some moments. But I'll re-read it, you can be sure about it !!
I hope you write more in the future. Your stuff is very exciting, I was really engaged by the characters' fates and dynamics. To the point that the vore part even became almost secondary focus.
Great job !!
Posted by hexagon 4 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
I have to admit, that my stories tend to get out of hand on a regular basis but I find stuff like vore or erotica in stories pretty much meaningless, if there is no character to attach it to.
I'm not good enough to make sharp and well written Persons in just a few words, so it takes time. :)
Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
I'm a bit like that aswell, it really makes the vore part more impactful and interesting when you know the characters and feel involved in the plot.
I really like your universe anyway. Do you plan on writing another chapter ?
Posted by hexagon 4 years ago Report
Future stories are very likely to also take place in this Framework but if this specific group will have another appearance, I don't know yet.
Posted by Guest14456 4 years ago Report
In any case, I'd gladly read your future submissions !!
Posted by POPOMOHA 4 years ago Report
The king has returned ????????????
Posted by hexagon 4 years ago Report
Which King? I did not mention him in this story :D
Posted by POPOMOHA 4 years ago Report
xD this long story felt like a short one anyway glad you're back
Posted by hexagon 4 years ago Report
Well, I was never gone, but it will take time to write something new, currently rather occupied
Posted by POPOMOHA 4 years ago Report
take ur time im oppsessed with this universe you've created you sir have great writing skills i salute u