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This is the second part of a 3 page comic commissioned by boahancocklover43543
As per usual, I love and appreciate constructive critical feedback.
Posted by Mettra 6 years ago Report
You hears her sne wants to go down further :3
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Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 6 years ago Report
Hoooly shit, that bulge!
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Posted by Heymanand 6 years ago Report
I feel like her neck is a bit long in the second panel but that bulge is god-tier
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
I think that's just because Moira just has a relatively long neck, and she's tilting her head upward relative to the first panel, which accentuates the length; That and Pharah's mouth and tongue kinda masks where Moira's neck slopes into her torso.
Anyway, thanks, I'm glad you think so!
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Posted by Debolte 6 years ago Report
I believe they perhaps mean we should be seeing the prey's shoulders as some sort of bulge in the cheeks or around there. Great sequence so far nevertheless, melikesalot :3
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
Ah. Yeah, I thought about that, but I couldn't conceive of a way to do that without Pharah's head, jaw, and neck looking uncanny at best. I suppose I could have just given her some cartoonish chipmunk cheeks and it wouldn't be as grotesque, but I felt like that would just draw attention to how relatively slim her jaw and throat are. Kind of an inherent hurdle to depicting someone eating something bigger than themselves, there's no correct way to depict the impossible.
In the end, I just decided to trade a bit of realism for not giving Pharah a big gross monster head; No offense to people into big gross monster heads~
Regardless of whether or not you agree with that approach, I really appreciate the feedback, and it's great to hear you like it~
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Posted by Debolte 6 years ago Report
Yeah :) I myself prefer the stretchy jaw approach (though not monstrous). It's admittedly very hard to make look pretty and I don't know many that succeed. Then above that it's still a matter of taste. Some just don't like seeing the slightest mouth stretch, and that's fine~
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
Maybe I should do some more experimenting with that approach. I dunno, perhaps I could make it work with a little practice. We'll see~
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Posted by starhotbar 6 years ago Report
I love that prey's face imprint on pred's throat so much ^^
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
Thanks~
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Posted by The K 6 years ago Report
Amazing throat bulge.
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
Thank you ^^
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Posted by JohnnyF102 6 years ago Report
ahh man i wanted to see more
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
Patience my child, patience~
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Posted by JohnnyF102 6 years ago Report
yee lol
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Posted by creativeandoriginal 6 years ago Report
That looks like a somewhat short tongue.
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Posted by DrakaNoms 6 years ago Report
The average human tongue is only about 10cm total; Seems like a pretty normal amount to actually be hanging out of her mouth.
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Posted by creativeandoriginal 6 years ago Report
huh. interesting
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Posted by Doshi64 5 years ago Report
Would love to see part 3.
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Posted by DrakaNoms 5 years ago Report
Within a week~
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