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CM: Pharah Always Gets Her Prey (Page 2) By DrakaNoms -- Report

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This is the second part of a 3 page comic commissioned by boahancocklover43543
As per usual, I love and appreciate constructive critical feedback.

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Mettra

Posted by Mettra 2 years ago Report

You hears her sne wants to go down further :3

ThatBrassyGuy

Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 2 years ago Report

Hoooly shit, that bulge!

Heymanand

Posted by Heymanand 2 years ago Report

I feel like her neck is a bit long in the second panel but that bulge is god-tier

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 2 years ago Report

I think that's just because Moira just has a relatively long neck, and she's tilting her head upward relative to the first panel, which accentuates the length; That and Pharah's mouth and tongue kinda masks where Moira's neck slopes into her torso.
Anyway, thanks, I'm glad you think so!

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 2 years ago Report

I believe they perhaps mean we should be seeing the prey's shoulders as some sort of bulge in the cheeks or around there. Great sequence so far nevertheless, melikesalot :3

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 2 years ago Report

Ah. Yeah, I thought about that, but I couldn't conceive of a way to do that without Pharah's head, jaw, and neck looking uncanny at best. I suppose I could have just given her some cartoonish chipmunk cheeks and it wouldn't be as grotesque, but I felt like that would just draw attention to how relatively slim her jaw and throat are. Kind of an inherent hurdle to depicting someone eating something bigger than themselves, there's no correct way to depict the impossible.
In the end, I just decided to trade a bit of realism for not giving Pharah a big gross monster head; No offense to people into big gross monster heads~

Regardless of whether or not you agree with that approach, I really appreciate the feedback, and it's great to hear you like it~

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 2 years ago Report

Yeah :) I myself prefer the stretchy jaw approach (though not monstrous). It's admittedly very hard to make look pretty and I don't know many that succeed. Then above that it's still a matter of taste. Some just don't like seeing the slightest mouth stretch, and that's fine~

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 2 years ago Report

Maybe I should do some more experimenting with that approach. I dunno, perhaps I could make it work with a little practice. We'll see~

starhotbar

Posted by starhotbar 2 years ago Report

I love that prey's face imprint on pred's throat so much ^^

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 2 years ago Report

Thanks~

The K

Posted by The K 2 years ago Report

Amazing throat bulge.

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 2 years ago Report

Thank you ^^

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 1 year ago Report

ahh man i wanted to see more

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 1 year ago Report

Patience my child, patience~

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 1 year ago Report

yee lol

creativeandoriginal

Posted by creativeandoriginal 1 year ago Report

That looks like a somewhat short tongue.

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 1 year ago Report

The average human tongue is only about 10cm total; Seems like a pretty normal amount to actually be hanging out of her mouth.

creativeandoriginal

Posted by creativeandoriginal 1 year ago Report

huh. interesting

Doshi64

Posted by Doshi64 1 year ago Report

Would love to see part 3.

DrakaNoms

Posted by DrakaNoms 1 year ago Report

Within a week~