This is a revised version, I fixed a lot of pacing and world-building issues... I hope.

Thomas wakes up in an unfamiliar warm soft place, and things only get worse from there. He realizes that he drank way too much the night before and can't remember what happened, to include telling Adeline way to much. He is almost eaten by a Stallion and Rabbit, but gets saved at the last minute only to get yelled at. And is forced to do naked housework as punishment, then gets urinated on....

12,000 words

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