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May's Malicious Spa By TheVoreEngineer -- Report

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Tags: Cooking F/F Female Pred Female Prey hotsprings Human Pred Human Prey Lillie May Oral Vore Pokemon Pokemon Emerald Pokemon Ruby and Sapphire pokemon sun and moon Preparation Scat spa Story Surprise Cooking teasing Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Willing prey writing Yuri Edit

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The heat of Alola is naught but a distant memory for Lillie, travelled across the many regions of the world, and yet as she settles into Hoenn, she can't help but find a trainer equally interested in her origins. A champion far less interested in team composition, but rather something far more, visceral, and delicious...

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Cobbly

Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report

I'm kinda wasted right now, so I might be wrong, but you really need to learn to end a sentence

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TheVoreEngineer

Posted by TheVoreEngineer 6 years ago Report

No, you're probably right. I do have an issue with run on sentences some times, and reading back it seems that's happened a bit in this story, it is for sure something I need to work on. Thanks for the feedback!

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BardicLasher

Posted by BardicLasher 6 years ago Report

This is really good. Hope to see more from you like this in the future!

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TheVoreEngineer

Posted by TheVoreEngineer 6 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm hoping to make more things too, which seems to coincide with what you want, huzzah.

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