Hmmmmmm, a crossover between Star Wars and Legend of Zelda? Its one of those crossovers that I will say have the chance of occurring just never implemented for me to see until now. The best way I can describe what I'm feeling is like the one time I drank/chugged a bottle of RumChata in the span of an hour. Its sweet a first, gets you that nice level of drunken buzz, allows you to see weird stuff, but in the end leaves you bloated, hungover, and dazed and confused as to what happened the night before since your attention span dropped lower than a stripper's thong due to an alcohol overdose.
All in all writing was awesome as always, a tad bit long for my tastes, the crossover choice is resembling a fever dream I had, and the tiny words detailing what song was playing hurt my eyes and distracted me from the story a bit.
However, as I write this comment while downing a glass of Kentucky Gentlemen, a really good whiskey by the by, I can say you take chances, make mistakes, and get really messy when it comes to this in the best way possible. So cheers and have a nice day... oh and have a free: "My Reason to Listen to You Has Dropped Lower Than A Stripper's Thong" t-shirt. Now on sale at your nearest Anonymous Lurker's T-Shirt Push Cart. Limited Supplies Last.
I appreciate the critique. I originally had the music cues full sized, but then I thought they were too distracting, considered cutting them, but decided to shrink them instead because I already wrote them. As for the crossover, just you wait. This is all set up to even larger crossover with a bunch of different franchises. Infinity War most ambitious crossover event in history? My foot! I'll show them! As for your shirt, I think I'll pass. Not nearly as good as your other ones.
There's a saying somewhere that says 'Don't look a gifted horse in the mouth.' but there is a saying 'Beware Greeks bearing gifts.' too. Either way you dishonor me with that transgression and must be punished accordingly.
Well, -truhgni you is out of the question Mr. Scribe at least... -isyhpyllac is borderline impossible... -tnemylla... maybe... -oitomeyllan... maybe... but the real question is what kind of tolerance can you take... before -carcgnik and -solgni it... -asniytin and -rcsdrowselbma are a hell of a drug you know?
Seye ym ni tnemhsinup hguone tneced a sa uoy htiw dnuora gnikcuf dnif I tub.
Only if his sister dies! The Hylian Royal Family goes by first born daughter to ensure there is always a new Zelda ready to rise to the occasion. Although now I think that Ben has forfeited his spot in the line of succession any ways...
Posted by AnonymousLurker 5 years ago Report
Hmmmmmm, a crossover between Star Wars and Legend of Zelda? Its one of those crossovers that I will say have the chance of occurring just never implemented for me to see until now. The best way I can describe what I'm feeling is like the one time I drank/chugged a bottle of RumChata in the span of an hour. Its sweet a first, gets you that nice level of drunken buzz, allows you to see weird stuff, but in the end leaves you bloated, hungover, and dazed and confused as to what happened the night before since your attention span dropped lower than a stripper's thong due to an alcohol overdose.
All in all writing was awesome as always, a tad bit long for my tastes, the crossover choice is resembling a fever dream I had, and the tiny words detailing what song was playing hurt my eyes and distracted me from the story a bit.
However, as I write this comment while downing a glass of Kentucky Gentlemen, a really good whiskey by the by, I can say you take chances, make mistakes, and get really messy when it comes to this in the best way possible. So cheers and have a nice day... oh and have a free: "My Reason to Listen to You Has Dropped Lower Than A Stripper's Thong" t-shirt. Now on sale at your nearest Anonymous Lurker's T-Shirt Push Cart. Limited Supplies Last.
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
I appreciate the critique. I originally had the music cues full sized, but then I thought they were too distracting, considered cutting them, but decided to shrink them instead because I already wrote them. As for the crossover, just you wait. This is all set up to even larger crossover with a bunch of different franchises. Infinity War most ambitious crossover event in history? My foot! I'll show them! As for your shirt, I think I'll pass. Not nearly as good as your other ones.
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Posted by AnonymousLurker 5 years ago Report
There's a saying somewhere that says 'Don't look a gifted horse in the mouth.' but there is a saying 'Beware Greeks bearing gifts.' too. Either way you dishonor me with that transgression and must be punished accordingly.
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Oh, and how do you plan on doing that?
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Posted by AnonymousLurker 5 years ago Report
Well, -truhgni you is out of the question Mr. Scribe at least... -isyhpyllac is borderline impossible... -tnemylla... maybe... -oitomeyllan... maybe... but the real question is what kind of tolerance can you take... before -carcgnik and -solgni it... -asniytin and -rcsdrowselbma are a hell of a drug you know?
Seye ym ni tnemhsinup hguone tneced a sa uoy htiw dnuora gnikcuf dnif I tub.
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Fool, none of those effect me!
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Posted by AnonymousLurker 5 years ago Report
Anctsiserper semoervc inayknd of riebrarr.
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Posted by Seelane 5 years ago Report
He might curse you with the most dangerous curse to ever exist... Writer Block...
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
*GASP* Don't say that accursed affliction or it might come true! I'll never get to writing Breath of the Wild down path 2B if that's the case!
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Posted by AnonymousLurker 5 years ago Report
Ybvedorey epek atklngi, rheowrev sbrewlrotcikt si a uitaselb unmenispth rfo a cpiaehtt earctreu elik syelrfuo.
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Posted by Seelane 5 years ago Report
“Ben, my son,” Link pleaded, “What are you doing?
Ben replied coldly, "Suceeding you, father."
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 5 years ago Report
Only if his sister dies! The Hylian Royal Family goes by first born daughter to ensure there is always a new Zelda ready to rise to the occasion. Although now I think that Ben has forfeited his spot in the line of succession any ways...
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