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Rookie Mistake By kingbryan84 -- Report

Long-time lurker; first time poster with a story I've been sitting on for a long time.

A what-if scenario where Nick decides to deal with Judy much earlier in the movie.

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ChaoskampfNunc

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report

It's called a hustle

Jagged1

Posted by Jagged1 6 years ago Report

I've waited to see this story made since the movie came out, and you don't disappoint! This is one of the best debuts I've seen on a story site in the recent years.

How about posting this also on SoFurry for a wider audience? You'd make a hell of an impression even on a non-vore-focused site.

Combat

Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report

This, this was bloody amazing. One of the best stories I've read this year. Well done indeed.

33defence

Posted by 33defence 6 years ago Report

Holy shit, this was amazing. This is easily one of my favorite Zootopia vore stories, hands down.

Deleteduser89324b

Posted by Deleteduser89324b 6 years ago Report

nice story do you take requests?

Swalloweredipus

Posted by Swalloweredipus 4 years ago Report

Imagine if, when nick climaxed, judy took a chance and ate him instead...

But anyway, will there be a part 2?